The Zero Tolerance Approach to Punctuation
by Lynne Truss
"Which sounds quite interesting until you look inside the paper and discover that the story concerns a quite large mob..."

I think that this essay had both pros and cons to it. I think that it was really hard to read in some parts, but was kind of funny in other parts of it. I really think that it could have been shorter and still have had all of the some things in it. Some of the examples it gave were really good and it showed me a lot. During some of the parts I really think that this lady had too much time on her hands. This wasn't my favorite or even on the list of favorite essays we read during this school year.